Monday, 4 May 2020

Quick Write Term 2

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4 comments:

  1. Raquel Parsons4 May 2020 at 14:34

    Kia Ora Atawai
    I really enjoyed reading your take on today's sentence starter.
    I want to know what happens next!
    Ka pai
    Mrs Parsons

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  2. Anonymous4 May 2020 at 14:44

    Hi Atawai! it's River your bestie. I love how you made your story interesting and I couldn't wait to read it, and also it was extremely funny. Maybe next time add more speech marks so we know when you are speaking. Great job Atawai!

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  3. Lynne4 May 2020 at 19:05

    Hi Atawai, What a great story. I can't wait to read the rest either. I like what River said with speech marks, good idea.
    Keep up your great work
    Mrs Thompson

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  4. Mrs Devine4 May 2020 at 19:58

    Hi Atawai,
    Your story was a bit scary, I hope you don't get roasted or eaten,
    Great work!
    Mrs Devine

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